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Das der Knochen ein wenig stark zu sehen ist, ist mir sowas von egal, weil ich eh nur in Ihr wunderschön natürliches Gesicht schaue 
Schön das ihr so gut befreundet seit, dann brauch ich mir keine Gedanken mehr machen ...hihi!
Ja! Wer weiß vielleicht fange ich ja im August schon eine Lehre an.^^ 
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The first think that i see on this picture is the arm bone of the girl, i think that you need be more careful next time because that bone do not look nice. mahbe another orietation of you or model help to eleminate that.
The second thing is that i think the picture look beter whith little more space on the right site, that will be little less central and mahbe more intresting, but this is only my opinion and a not a real thing to do. If you like this composition in my opinion is very good.
Now the prons:
So the most important thing, light, ist grat. No less no more just great
Second the emotion of girl we can realy can see that in her face and eyes good job.
The third is conversion to B&W very good and smooth. Like it very much
And at lest the DOF it is very nice that eyes and lips are sharp and the rest of the head start to blur. It gives some magic in this picture.
At the end, grat job, great picture i love it, only that bone in the front
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